I am sort of refining the story cause I feel the original one I wrote is too much details and so much "back in time" scene... I just wanna keep it as simple as posible so that I won't confuse the reader...

And also I need to remove the racial issues cause I think it'd be a little sensitive on the racial stereotype so I'll avoid it no matter what... o___o Therefore basically I need to revamp a bit on my original story.
BUT it is still a shounen-ai genre don't worry~! 8D